نمونه شماره یک رایتینگ تسک 2 آیلتس
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 001
WRITNG TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.
To what extend do you agree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Model answer by S. Hosseini:
Our feelings, thoughts, voids, and pains are presented through arts such as acting, music and painting namely a few. Some people believe in the inappropriateness of letting artists openly show their thoughts and sentiments; the authorities are in charge of censorship. Nonetheless, to me it seems pointless limiting them; I believe liberating them lets the unsaid be told, helps the society grow and leads to a much creative community.
Firstly, as every one of us has undergone, some things in life cannot be explained in words since they are incapable of conveyance, so the transmission key is in hands of arts. For instance, I always had a lot to say whereas I never could, now that I am participating in acting classes, I feel much better as I have found ways to express my emotions. Moreover, not everything is sayable; to faithfully deliver the message, more sophisticated tools are needed.
Additionally, the more human beings keep their thoughts as secrets, the more they fall behind and vice-versa; that is, blocking people draws the society to a halt meeting opportunities. In the 21st century, the third world countries are the ones that have been restricting the artistic people for a long time.
Furthermore, innovativeness comes where no one is terrified of openness. Galileo showed us how it was like to live in a reactionary regime as he discovered the global shape of the earth, dared to break the news, and how he confronted the suppressive consequences. Al-Hallaj, the Iranian mystic philosopher is another case in hand when said “I’m the truth” and was hanged mistaken for “I’m God.”
To put it in a nutshell, even though some people find it unsuitable to allow artists to articulate, I am certain that no one has the right to circumscribe any creature; yet, it is not an absolutely implicit attitude. (306)
آنالیز مقاله ی فوق (رایتینگ تسک 2 آیلتس - essay)
این یک سوال بحث برانگیز یا argumentative می باشد.
در این مورد، ما می بایست با ادعای داده شده موافقت یا مخالفت کنیم.
نکات اولیه:
- موافقت یا مخالفت شما تاثیری در نمره ی شما ندارد.
- نیازی نیست با جهتی که موافقت می کنید قلبا موافق باشید.
- جهتی را انتخاب کنید که می توانید به خوبی توصیف کرده و ثابت کنید.
- حداقل دو و حداکثر سه دلیل برای موافقت/مخالفت اعلام کنید.
- اگر استثناعاتی وجود دارد، آن را در پاراگراف سوم بدنه عنوان کنید.
در پاراگراف معرفی، حوزه ی بحث را شرح دهید. آن را به صورت سوال لینک کرده و صورت سوال را paraphrase کنید. سپس جهتی را که با آن موافق/مخالف هستید عنوان کرده و لیست تلگرافی دلایل خود را بنویسید.
در هر پاراگراف بدنه، فقط یک دلیل را توضیح بدهید. فراموش نکنید که پس از اعلام ادعاها، حتما آن ها را ساپورت کنید.
در پاراگراف نتیجه گیری، خلاصه ی مقاله را در یکی دو خط نوشته و سپس یک چشم انداز مثبت، اخطار و یا توصیه ارایه کنید.
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