نمونه رایتینگ تسک2 شماره 017

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SAMPLE 017

WRITNG TASK 2

Should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In many cities crime is increasing. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce crime levels?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

SAMPLE1.

Crime is increasing rapidly in many cities due to many facts. Governments should find a way to reduce crimes, before it’s too late.

Reason of growing crime rate everywhere mainly is because of economy. It affects people’s main source of salary. In a situation where money is harder to acquire, everyone starts to find ways to get it, the easiest way is by committing crimes. As bad economy continues, more crime rate surely will grow.

In addition, another reason that crime is increasing is that the police forces don’t know how to handle the situation correctly. It may be from the lack of management skill by the government or somehow an impossible task was given, such as the government order polices to reduce crime rate to zero percent in a very high density area.

Therefore, the first priority for the governments is to try to strengthen their economy, in order to make people’s life easier. They should try to use their available resources in the right tasks. Learning from the history is one of a great option. However, increasing of police force in both numbers and efficiency should be done together along with government own objectives. Imagine a strong economic city without any police force patrolling them.

With the right decision from the governments, and the tasks that handle correctly, along with better economic. It is surely that increasing of crimes in every city will stop, along with better everyday life for everyone.

SAMPLE2.

As we have been living in advanced and developed age which gives many comforts and good living style to mortals as compare to bygone era but still there are some sins in our society, one of them is crime which is up surging day by day. I assert with the given statement due to umpteen reasons.

First and foremost reason of increasing in crime is an unemployment which enforced are youngsters to fall in this mud of darkness because due to computerization man work is shrinking like anything where computer is capable enough to do 10 times work than man do. As money would not be there so as usually youngsters caused crime for fulfilling their basic needs. Moreover due to uneducated those who didn't get job and turn into the world of an offense. As it's carried out by one of the survey in 2008 that 70% criminals do crime for their personal needs where rest for a fun purpose or to threaten others, apart from these factors one's society, moral values given by parents are the major contributor to make a good citizen if someone don't get that even it would be the commence of criminal.

The crime can be decreased by following some certain set of rules where public participation must be there to support laws because abuse of laws are inevitable in today's world. Government can open new opportunities by making a foundation of new industrial concepts and starting small scale industries as well. Guardians must ensure that they are providing a proper education to their children, not only education they are responsible to enhance their moral and spiritual intelligence where government role to avail effective and economical sources for aspirant academic training.

In crux, I believe that government should impose such kind of laws those must be strict and under the control of government and their employees so that it could work properly as it has been working in power nations of this universe.