نمونه شماره بیست و هشت رایتینگ تسک 2 آیلتس
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SAMPLE 028
WRITNG TASK 2
Should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Should criminals be sent to prison or should they do something else as a punishment? Explain your opinion and give your reasons.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
How to treat criminals put them in jail or do something else, is a tough question for people. Some people think they deserve to suffer strict punishments such as depriving of their freedom because they need to pay for what they did. The rest think they should be treated in a better way as not all criminals are bad. As for me, I cannot agree more with the view that imprisonment plays a more effective role in rehabilitating them.
According to the question specified above there are two ways to treat criminals, the first one is to send them to prison while the other is something else different from that, which I regard as not imprisoning them. Hence, here comes the problem, how to guarantee people’s safety while the law breakers are still around them. They will probably commit more crimes again. In other words, imprisonment is a good method to prevent them from approach to other people and their properties.
From psychological aspects, people naturally cannot bear to stay in a small sealed room for long because it makes them uncomfortable. The conditions in a prison are one example of that. Therefore, a prison is a harsh environment for those people against laws. At the same time, it can be used to warn them so that they will never try to do anything illegally. Moreover, it also deters potential criminals from committing crimes. As a result, crime rates can be reduced and everybody can embrace a brighter future.
From children’s upbringing aspect, sending criminals to prison makes a peaceful social atmosphere wherein children can be nurtured better without having any distractions on unhealthy information caused by those criminals such as violence and pornography on TV or on Internet. The closer they get to bad information, the higher possibility it is for them to imitate those misdeeds. As a consequence, they may become potential criminals and will cause damages to the society.
Being strict to those criminals is necessary for government. Firstly, they should be isolated from the rest of the society in the interest of a brighter future. Alternatively, education and labor jobs could play a supplementary role in this aspect.