نمونه رایتینگ تسک2 شماره 030

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SAMPLE 030

WRITNG TASK 2

Should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be a good member of the society. Other, however, believed that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

SAMPLE1.

The manner of children is important not only for themselves but also for the whole society. These children would be the future of a nation. Due to this significance, it is debatable that whether it is either parents or teachers who should be solely responsible for making them become good members of the society. There is a need to look at both of these views.

One school of thought holds that parents have the responsibility to teach the norms and behavior to their children. In other words, parents are the first institute of the child. Firstly, many psychologists believe that kids are very keen observer. They follow and try to imitate the behaviors of their mother and father. It is scientifically claimed that the majority of human personality traits are developed at the early age of life. Secondly, they spend most of the time with their parents before entering teenage hood. Based on that, parents are believed to have the ability to give better guide to their offspring what is right and wrong.

On the other hand, some people believe that school is the real place of teaching. Undoubtedly, school is much more than providing knowledge to students. They interact and communicate with their peers and friends and learn how to behave and react with them. At this age, they are mature enough to comprehend the difference of good and bad. This school of thought is also of the view that it is not obligatory that parents should be educated enough to teach whereas teachers are fully sufficient to influence the behaviors of their students.

Summing it up, I think that both of these views are satisfactory and it is not the responsibility of any party alone but it should be the combined effort of both parents and schools to make children a good member of the society.

SAMPLE2.

Children learning are affected by many factors. Both parents and school play important roles in building the children’s’ attitudes and behavior. In this assay, I am going to discuss both aspects.

To start with, parents have a major influence on their children. In addition, children, by nature, like to imitate their parents. As a result, the parents should work like a model for their children. For instance, the parents should behave well with other people, so their children would learn the good behavior.

On the other hand, school is the place where children reflect the attitude that they have learnt from their parents. Moreover, the school’s teachers have a very important impact in children’s attitude. The teachers would allocate the children’s behavior as good or bad. Therefore, the teachers need to understand their students to be able to guide them.

Furthermore, the school’s activity like group work would enhance the children’s recognition of the importance of working with others and sharing.

To sum up, although the children acquired their behavior and attitude from their parents, the school has a complementary role to direct the children to the right direction. Hence, both parents and school would effect in leading the children to be good members in their community.

In conclusion, I have to admire that children’s learning is a complex process that required careful attention. I believe that children acquired their behavior and attitude from the surrounding environment including their home and school. In addition, we should not ignore other factors like media and friends in shaping the children’s performance.

SAMPLE3.

Family is the primary organ in which children grow up, followed by schools that are instituted as a second fundamental organ to raise children. In addition, children need role models to develop their personalities. Accordingly, parents and teachers play an important role in teaching children to how to be a fair person for the society.

On the on hand, parents are first persons whom children are in touch with. Naturally, juveniles use to imitate some of their parent’s behaviors. Since there is a very close and intimate relationship between parents and children, kids tend to set their fathers and mothers as examples. Therefore, kids are more likely to learn from their parents. Especially before the age of school, parents are the only teachers that form infants’ behaviors and personalities. In this case we can hear people regularly say that this kid takes after his/her dad/mom’s behavior.

On the other hand, schools are, to be said, the second home of children. This means that teachers in schools have as much effects on pupils as parents do in homes. Therefore, teachers play a complementary role in developing children’s behaviors. They teach them how to be impressive and efficient individuals in communities. Considering that, it is seen in several cases that children, before attending schools, had very bad attitudes but when taking a part in schools, their attitudes had been changed considerably.

Taking all above into account, I believe that both parent and teacher groups are involved in improving young people’s characteristics to become fit to the society, although their roles are different, but both groups are essential in rearing kids in to the most desirable characters of the social system.

SAMPLE4.

Today the society is more centered on child development than ever. We can see two different opinions that are emerging. Some people claim that parents have to prepare their own children for the real life and others think the educational system has to train the young generations for it.

First of all, the parents have to help their children to grow in good conditions to get ready for the big jump in their future life. The parents are a model for children so they should behave appropriately regarding the situations, then children can understand in which manner they can act. Parents are the most important life’s teachers for their children also because they are spending a lot of time together in the family and in society.

On the other hand, the school also has an important role about preparing children to become respectable members of society. In fact, this education provides real life cases, mostly from a professional view. The school will help students to feel more comfortable with the different codes the society has. Another point is that the atmosphere in schools is also very helpful to develop their skills in society. Indeed a child will improve a lot of experiences with his classmates and it will help them to grow together as good members of society.

To conclude, both parents and schools are good teachers for children. Parents are a model in everyday life and the educational system is in great help to develop their skills and interact with others in society.