نمونه شماره چهل و سه رایتینگ تسک 2 آیلتس
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SAMPLE 043
WRITNG TASK 2
Should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Music is an important part in our life. It is necessary for three reasons: cultural identity, entertainment, and connections among countries. Firstly, music is believed to be a representation of our culture. Different countries have different genres of music. Based on the rhythms, one can say from where a song comes. Secondly, it plays an essential role in entertainment. For example, every party or ceremony needs music. When we feel stressful, we also listen to music. Finally, it is a connection among countries. As can be seen, for a good song such as “My heart will go on”, people can probably find it all over the world. Moreover, in many universities such as Macquarie University, we can easily find many ceremonies in which students from different countries gather together and play their traditional music so that students can understand more about other cultures and make friends during their university life.
From my personal perspective, the traditional and international music are of the same importance. As mentioned earlier, music is important because it is relaxing. Therefore, people can enjoy whatever kinds of music they feel interested in. Let’s assume that one kind of music is deemed as more important than the other. If people cannot enjoy it, it is just of no use. Besides that, different people have different tastes so we can find that some people will love traditional music whereas others are more interested in international music. Next, we need to maintain traditional music since it is part of our culture. If for whatever reasons we lose traditional music, all the songs around the world will be probably very similar to each other. At that time, everybody could feel indifferent to music because of its homogeneousness.
Music is really a part of our lives. It is usually referred as the sound of angels but nowadays there is a debate between the importance of traditional music and the international music. Which is more important between them?
International music is what is popular now. It changes in every generation and every day there is something new with it but sometimes, the change is not good for everyone’s ears especially the children who are most sensitive in the language used by the international music artists. It does not relate with the audience because it does not talks about their feelings, it is just a one’s point-of-view. And, sometimes it does not have sense; yes, it has a very good rhythm but how about its lyrics.
However, traditional music is already a part of culture of a nation. It says the people’s history, for example, the national anthem of the Philippines. It talks about the history, it is a history written in a song. In addition, it protects the sensitivity of children; in fact, it can help them learn their own culture and language. The audience can relate to the song not only with its rhythm but also with its lyrics because they know something about it and they are learning from it. Moreover, traditional music is written with a consideration to other’s point-of-view which signifies that it is written for all.
In a nutshell, music is very broad and it changes as time goes by. It has different varieties but when it comes to their importance, of course, the music which made a milestone in people’s lives is really the most important.
Nowadays, the music is very popular between people. Also we find many type of music that differs from one country to another.
People need music in their life because the music is the food of spirit, increase the sense of well being and make us relaxed. It helps us to forget our stress and sadness. For example, music expresses our feeling like someone who in love listened to love song.
Furthermore, there are two main type of music, traditional one and international. Young people preferred the international one and listen to it every day as it is fast and express their feelings. I think international music is important as we can learn foreign cultures, other language from it. In addition, it has many good types and diversity of sense.
On the other hand, the traditional music is the ID of our country and the result of cultures. It is used in national festival and attracted tourist.
In conclusion, I think it is important to listen to international music with preservation of our traditional one.