نمونه شماره پنجاه و سه رایتینگ تسک 2 آیلتس
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SAMPLE 053
WRITNG TASK 2
Should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
With the fast pace of the development of our world, every company and employee have to strive for the best to suit the needs of the society. It also means people are getting busier and busier every day. As a result, parents can only spend very little time on taking care of their children. Hence, it is believed that in today’s society many children have to suffer this lack of attention which did not happen before in the past.
Firstly, all professionals need to have rest after work. After a long day at work dealing with a great number of stressful jobs, it is clear that everyone needs to have some private space for themselves. Because of this workload, not many parents can spend enough time with their children.
Secondly, it is not rare to see many people have to work overtime. Eight hours working might not be enough for most business people. They have to constantly travel overseas and speak to numerous customers and clients. Undoubtedly, they will be very exhausted after coming back or they will come back very late when their children might have fallen asleep.
Next, educating children has become harder than ever before. Nowadays kids are getting more freedom than they used to. Parents have to be aware of this and have to respect their children’s rights. Hence, it will make parents sometimes feel difficult to spend time with their children.
In conclusion, it is clear that the lack of attention from parents to their children is getting worse which did not happen earlier. As mentioned above, this is because parents have to take more rest after work or they have to work overtime continuously. Besides that, spending time with their children requires them to have more knowledge than before.