نمونه شماره پنجاه و هشت رایتینگ تسک 2 آیلتس
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SAMPLE 058
WRITNG TASK 2
Should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some parents grow their children in strict discipline while others leave them free to learn lessons of lives on their own. Which is one of these is a better approach and why? Give your own opinion in not less than 250 words.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Children are the future of a country. Hence, teaching children should be seriously taken into consideration while we still have to ensure they all have a beautiful childhood. However, some parents believe growing their children in strict discipline would be better. In this essay, I'm going to prove that children should grow up in a relaxed environment in which they can learn life lessons.
Firstly, children should not be treated as an adult. In other words, they should be given the freedom to play, learn and make mistakes. Grown up people have certain levels of comprehension so that they can follow the regulations of their countries. On the other hand, most children do not get that ability at young age. Hence, treating children as adults is inappropriate.
Next, children have their own ways of learning. They are normally much quicker than adults in picking up new concepts. The way of teaching children therefore should be more innovative where making mistakes is unavoidable. For example, if a child is taught about the importance of helping his family members, he will be willing to help with the house work and his parents should be happy even though he could not help much and could make mistakes.
Finally, children deserve to have memorable childhood. To do that, they should not be treated strictly. Having said that, it does not mean they will not be punished for doing wrong things. Rather, it means they should be treated with kindness and a lot of loving from their parents.
Summing it up, I believe children should not be treated in strict discipline. They should be allowed to have their own ways of learning lessons of life. As mentioned earlier, children are our future. Hence, nurturing them in a right way is worth considering.