نمونه شماره هفتاد و چهاررایتینگ تسک 2 آیلتس
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SAMPLE 074
WRITNG TASK 2
Should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
As technologies develop, there are more challenges and requirements that young people have to deal with. It is very common that they find themselves having very little leisure time. From my personal perspective, there are three main causes which are poor education systems, wrong attitudes and lacking of places for entertaining. I’m going to address these issues and then give my personal thought as to what should be done to resolve this problem.
Firstly, many countries tend to have a very heavy education system. In such a country, people have to spend almost eight hours at school every day. After coming back, there are tons of assignments which are supposed to be handed in the day after that. Obviously, they are left with very few choices except studying.
Secondly, without a right attitude, a person could enforce himself to study just to have certificates. Some people might think further education is the only way for them to get employed or to earn their living. However, every human needs to have social relationships and of cause to enjoy his life. Next, not many countries have good places for entertaining. Without being organised, young people can be trapped into criminal activities. Therefore, every government has to take this into account. They have to organise and start building places for young people to gather and to establish social relationships.
From my personal viewpoint, one of the many solutions is to integrate outdoor activities into education systems. In other words, we should let young people have time to enjoy in social activities and to learn new skills that can give them a healthy life.
In some countries, students are being facing an extraordinary pressure from parents and teachers on their studies. It causes by so many reasons around the society and present growing needs for the employment.
Firstly, the main cause for the pressure in studies is change in education system. Present education syllabus and system built such a manner that it covers a huge area of syllabus. It is very difficult to the younger to complete the syllabus and reach the expectations and given goals by the teachers. Another cause would be extracurricular activities. Every student tend to participate in sports or dance school or martial arts etc, In top of their mental hard work at school again they have to participate such activities which means it makes them to tired physically also with no time left in hand.
In recent days, there is a passion developed in parents to pursue their children towards part time courses after the school timing. This is directly affects the youth achievements and they have to work very hard to meet all the given goals from the various fields like academic and extracurricular activities. As per the study there is 7% students committed suicide by not bearing the pressure given at school and home on their studies.
To solve these problems of the younger, teachers and parents should change their attitude. There should be a proper time table and feedback from the student. We should always give goals and targets which is possible, not with many strain and stress. Mainly we have to consider the likes and dislike of the students and basis we have to approach with our plans and strategies. With this it remedies surely that we can make students to avoid stress in their studies.