نمونه شماره هفتاد و هشت رایتینگ تسک 2 آیلتس
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SAMPLE 078
WRITNG TASK 2
Should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
In order to reduce crime, we need to attack the causes of crime such as poverty and lack of educational opportunities. It is not enough to simply have more police on the street and put more people into prison.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
One of the most significant issues that many people of today's society are very concerned for is how to decrease the ratio of crime. The question whether increasing the quantity of police and sentences in prison or focus on solving the root of reasons is a contentious one.This essay will discuss two sides and present my opinion.
From one hand, many people argue that it is not simple that there are more polices on the street or give more sentences in prisons then crime can be reduced. It is believed that solving poverty and lack of education can be decrease the ratio of crime noticeably. Since when people is poverty, they have to struggle to find out a survey way. Therefore, if they do not have any job to able to earn legal money, they will be easy to commit, such as robbing, murder smuggling. Furthermore, people are poverty or lack of education often discriminated. It is also a motivation that has caused more criminals. In addition, they usually do not frighten of prison because prison may be better than their cost of living. As result, the government need to create more job and develop education widely and it must ensure that costing of living is not a pressure enough to lead to commit. Finally, the government needs concern to reduce discrimination in society degrees.
From the other hand, maintaining the quantity of police on the street is really necessary. If there are less police, people is easy to commit because of greed. Moreover, many serious criminal is still punished in prison.
In conclusion, I agree that we focus on solving the root of reasons is more important. However, it is essential to link it to punishments strictly then reducing crime will be gain effectively.