نمونه شماره صد وپنجاه و سه رایتینگ تسک 2 آیلتس
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SAMPLE 153
WRITNG TASK 2
Should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, language becomes a major factor that affects personal success. Many people prefer to study abroad to English-speaking country because English is an international language. There is no doubt that the best way to improve the English language skill is to use the English language daily so if people study in English speaking countries, their English language will be improved automatically and it will give them some advantages such as opportunities to work in many countries or they will be able travel to many different places without studying other languages.
Firstly, the English language is widely used in many countries and at present, the world traders are currently developing rapidly. In order to compete with people from different countries, it is essential to be able to communicate in the English language. For example, China has been improving a lot in many sectors. They are able to compete with other countries because many people in China are aware of the importance of the English language and they are trying hard to study English.
Secondly, many companies prefer to employ people who can speak English because if the companies create new branch in different countries, the employers are able to move the new branch without employing new people and the branches company is still able to communicate with the central company. In fact, one of the largest companies in the world (Google) has created some branches in different countries and each of the Google employees is able to discuss things or otherwise communicate even though they are in different countries because they all use English to communicate.
In conclusion, many people move to English speaking countries for further studies because they believe that it will improve their English skills and in order to become a successful person in the future, mastering English is essential.
This essay is too long (313 words instead of 250-265). It isn’t a problem on its own, but wasting time on writing more content that you don’t get extra marks for is not wise. Also the more content you write, the more room for mistakes you create, There are a lot of poorly structured sentences and grammatical errors (see comments underlined in blue). Overall, this looks like a Band 6–6.5 essay.