نمونه شماره صد وپنجاه و شش رایتینگ تسک 2 آیلتس
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SAMPLE 156
WRITNG TASK 2
Should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
There is no doubt that richer nations have better facilities and they have improved fields like health, education and trade. However, poorer nations are less developed in such fields. I agree with the claim that richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in this matter.
Richer countries are developed in major fields which help in overall improvement of country. In the matter of education, they have better and fast means of education and also they have updated education. To illustrate, they use computers which makes education easy and faster. Health facilities are also improved like they have better technical machines for body checkup and for operations also big hospitals with quality of medicines. Moreover, improved business helps to make better economical strength. So such fields make a county rich and updated.
On the other hand, the story is totally opposite in poorer countries. They are on the way of development, so they are at the back in every field as compare to developed countries. For example, they use traditional means of education and have not updated education. Similarly, small hospitals with simple treatment can not face the serious health problems. Every country’s business depends on education. So it is obvious that poorer nations with low education cannot make a good standard of trade.
To put the matter into proper light, developed or richer nations should help more the poorer by giving their resources and better means. But there is also a need that poorer countries should follow the richer and should do self improvement.
In conclusion, it is clear that to walk with modern world poorer nations should have to be improved otherwise they fall down from present. Help of richer countries will not only goes to poorer but will help world to improve.
In today's sophisticated society, people of the developing countries are still fighting for their basic rights such as better healthcare, proper education and a sound source of income. While because the governments of the underdeveloped countries are struggling to improve the living standards of their people, I believe that contributions by richer nations should be more in this regard.
To begin, all human beings should help each other. Governments of richer nations can take many steps to improve the living standards of the poorer nations. (it is not really clear why this short paragraph is here – paragraphs should really be at least three sentences. I would delete this as you seem to be just repeating your thesis)
Firstly, in the field of healthcare, developed countries can support he underdeveloped in many ways. They can send their expert doctors to train the medical staff in the developing countries. Also, they can open free medical camps in the selected areas of poor countries. In this way free medical advice could be given. Such camps can also start health awareness campaigns to make people aware of unhealthy lifestyles. Moreover, experts from the developed countries can also help with the vaccination programs in the developing countries. This will lead to decreases in infant mortality rates.
Secondly, assistance in the field of education should be provided to the poorer nations. The developed countries can provide funds to open new schools and polytechnic institutions. These will not only increase the literacy rate, but will also provide vocational education. Furthermore, the rich governments should provide the students of poor countries an opportunity to study in the prestigious institutions by giving scholarships. This will promote help poor people to gain higher education.
Finally, rich nations should help to improve the economy of poor countries. This can be done by promoting free trade. This will reduce barriers to international trade such as tariffs, import quotas and export fees and will help to lift the developing countries out of poverty.
To conclude, if we want to live in a better world with peace and harmony, we should always help each other. Therefore, I believe that richer nations should help the poor countries in all the fields.
In balancing the world economic growth, the under development of the Third World Nations have been drawn to the attention of the developed countries of the Western. Thus, governmental policies and interference in the agricultural business of the poorer nations were made to secure their dominant source of the economy. Many discussions among economists and politicians also put their focus on the other aspects. That is, to improve the health, education and trade for the developing countries. However, the improvements cannot be made by these countries, but more external assistance and aids should be done.
Because of the shortage of food supply, the people in poorer nations (i.e. Africa) are easily prone to disease, hunger and death. When natural or environmental disastres happen, they are threatened with their lives. Education cannot be well developed as a result of frequent droughts, famines and disease spreading. The other countries, while emphasizing on the development of agriculture in the Third World, cannot really give the solution to the cyclical problem which has been existing for a long time. It is time to consider the consequences of all the waste of efforts in trying to help the economic growth of the Third World and to think from the other perspectives. The richer countries have the power to rebuild the Third World by taking care of the essentials - health, education and trade. More aids for providing the medicine, educational needs and materials can be done by the richer countries. The assistance of trade and developing business in the poorer countries also can be of a great help to the poorer nations.
If the richer countries can be more serious about the essential issues of how a nation develops, and well consider the special situations and circumstances those poorer nations are facing, the improvements will be more efficiently made. The governments of developed countries are, in some ways, responsible - though not obliged - for the future of those developing countries.a Band 6 score.