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نمونه شماره صد و شصت و چهار رایتینگ تسک 2 آیلتس

IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SAMPLE 164

 

 

WRITNG TASK 2

 

 

 

Should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

 

Write about the following topic:

 

Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.

 

 

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

 

 You should write at least 250 words.

 

 

 

Today’s world has been divided into developing and industrialized countries where the main difference between them is the amount of money that governments apply in important sectors such as education, health and commerce. Most of the poorer nations are buried in debts as a result of their unbalanced finances which are reflected in a poor health care, an unstructured education system and a weak international trade. This vicious cycle will continue indefinitely unless wealthier nations show interest in minimizing the worldwide economic differences, as well as taking more responsibility for assisting less fortunate countries.

 

 

Most of the African countries live in inhuman conditions because of the extreme poverty, upheaval, hunger, disease, unemployment, lack of education and both inexperienced and corrupt administrations. The devastating consequences of the AIDS epidemic in those countries could improve if the infected population were to receive free drugs to control the disease, have access to health professionals and get information on how to prevent its spread. But this can only be achieved through international help programs in which leaders of the world’s richest countries donate medicine and also send doctors and nurses to treat and educate those in need.

 

 

Moreover, most of the poor countries rely on selling agricultural products and raw materials to rich nations and buying industrialized products from them which results in a huge financial deficit. Consequently, they borrow a significant amount of money from the World Bank to try to improve their broken economies, but sometimes the money disappears with no significant changes and they cannot even pay the interest to the bank. Regarding this issue, last year the G8, which is comprised of leaders of the eight richest nations, decided to forgive billions of dollars worth of debt owed by the world’s poorest nations. In addition, they developed adequate loan programs to financially assist those countries.

 

 

In conclusion, leaders of the industrialized countries play an indispensable role in assisting developing nations in dealing with essential areas such as health, education and trade. Also, their aid is the key to breaking the vicious cycle, which results in poverty and death.

 

 

This is a great essay, seems to be on a Band 8 level, there’s nothing to improve here.

 

 

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اکسیر آیلتس پس از سال ها فعالیت درخشان و مستمر به آکادمی زبان اکسیر گسترش یافته و هم اکنون در زمینه های زبان عمومی، آیلتس، تافل، PTE و GRE فعالیت دارد. تمامي خدمات اين مجموعه، حسب مورد، داراي مجوزهاي لازم از مراجع مربوطه مي‌باشند و تابع قوانين و مقررات جمهوري اسلامي ايران است.

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