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IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SAMPLE 169

 

 

WRITNG TASK 2

 

 

 

Should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

 

Write about the following topic:

 

Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

 

 

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

 

 You should write at least 250 words.

 

 

 

Throwing parties can be expensive. While some people do not find these fancy parties worth what they cost, others believe parties are important to both individuals and the society.

 

 

People choose to throw parties for a number of reasons. For starters, parties can make better teams. Project kick-off parties are good opportunities to break the ice and help team members to know each other better. Victory parties create a sense of success and belongingness. Companies do not see parties as waste of money and allocate budget to support such events. Moreover, parties often leave good memories. From our own experiences, we all have happy memories of our birthday parties when we were little. Every family has great photos which were taken on family parties in their album. In addition, contrary to what some people believe that spending on parties is a waste of social resources, parties actually create value, either by employing people in the party planning business or by offering people better party experiences.

 

 

The popularity of parties, however, causes some tension in the society. Parties are hard on introverted people who find themselves uncomfortable in parties. This is a clinic symptom which psychologists call “social anxiety disorder”. There are other ways to celebrate important events that may have greater value for their cost. For instance, companies could send out gifts after successful projects and parents could take their children on family trips to celebrate birthdays.

 

 

 

In my opinion, while a party is a form of social event that brings many benefits to individuals and the society, other choices should also be considered, either to cut spending or to relieve the stress of those who are not fond of parties.

 

 

This is a very good essay. Other than minor inaccuracies there are no problems (mouse over the words underlined in blue shows corrections). It seems to be worth IELTS Band 8.

 

 

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